Would this blurb make you want to go?

**noo noo** · 24-01-2007, 03:34pm

Doing a listing for the venu where I work for a Parents Directory. Would the following make you want to go? Are there any other "family friendly" type aspects I've forgotten - or is there anything in there that would put you off?

Thanks!

The ****
**** Street, Aberdeen
Telephone 01224 ****
A family friendly venue with baby changing facilities, highchairs, kids menu, vegetarian options, pushchair accessible and breastfeeding welcome. The café is open noon till 4pm Thursday to Sunday – last orders 2.30pm Every Saturday its Family Saturday in the café incorporating free Children’s Crafts, Games, Face Painting & Activities from 12.30 till 2.30pm. Why not book a table? 01***** A great way to put some good food and fun into your weekend. We have kids theatre, comedy, dance and music shows in our Studio theatre at least once a month – see our advertisement for details of upcoming shows - or check out our website www.****** (under 2’s are admitted free to kids shows provided they sit on your knee!) You can combine a children’s show at The **** studio theatre with food & Family Saturday activities in The **** Café for a great kids birthday party! We offer group discount of one free ticket for every 10 tickets bought. Our party food package comprises platters on the table of sandwiches, homemade sausage rolls & crisps, jugs of squash and jelly & ice cream for £5 a head.

**Adelelee** · 24-01-2007, 03:35pm

Definately, sounds brill, wish I lived nearer

**1980babe** · 24-01-2007, 03:37pm

Sounds enticing

Also there is lots of info.

**Skerry Berry** · 24-01-2007, 03:41pm

Sounds great - we may come along one Saturday soon

**book_lover** · 24-01-2007, 04:03pm

Sounds good noo noo

Someone beat me to it with the Parent Directory idea then

xxxxx

**noo noo** · 25-01-2007, 09:21am

Originally Posted by book_lover

Sounds good noo noo

Someone beat me to it with the Parent Directory idea then

xxxxx

http://www.parentsdirectory.co.uk/

The Parent Directory's been going since 1999 - not sure when the Aberdeen/Aberdeeshire one started - certainly been about for the last 3- 4 years.

I guess my entry is perfect then?

**book_lover** · 25-01-2007, 09:38am

So my idea was ALWAYS a no go then? Obviously didn't do my research very well did I

(actually I didn't really do any research, just spouted about my idea on here a fair bit

).

Originally Posted by noo noo

http://www.parentsdirectory.co.uk/

I guess my entry is perfect then?

ooh-er missus

xxx

**pickle** · 25-01-2007, 09:15pm

Sounds great. TBH I would be in fear of the place heaving when I got there, if I read that & planned to go along

**flipflop** · 25-01-2007, 10:41pm

Sounds like a great place!
Being *very* picky, there should be an apostrophe in ...every Saturday it's Family Saturday... but then you weren't asking for proof readers were you!?

A family directory is a great idea!